Early acclaim won’t harm a writer if he has the strength, or the cynicism, not to believe in that acclaim. But Norman lapped it up, and is perhaps only now recovering from the deception. True, he was very young, the success was very great — and the book was very good. Reading The Naked and the Dead today, one is astounded by Mailer’s precocious sense of human variety, by the way he goes a step further into the extremities of exhaustion, yearning and terror, and, above all, by his ability to listen intensely to the ordinary voices of America. The novel was impossibly adult: the immaturity was all to come.
It is hard to imagine the kind of freedom that was suddenly Mailer’s. After an equivalent success, an English writer might warily give up his job as a schoolmaster, or buy a couple of filing cabinets.
But Mailer had the whole of America to play with. Flattered and lionised, he bummed around Hollywood failing to write a screenplay, lived it up a good deal, and discovered a further perk of literary fame: ‘getting girls I would never otherwise have gotten’. ‘I was a node in a new electronic landscape of celebrity, personality and status.’ The only trouble was that he had nothing left to write about.
The reception of Mailer’s second novel, Barbary Shore (1951), was hysterical too, but the nature of the hysteria had changed. ‘It is relatively rare to discover a novel’, wrote one of the more temperate reviewers, ‘whose obvious intention is to debauch as many readers as possible, mentally, morally, physically and politically.’ A murky, paceless tale of spies and subversives, predators and impotents, the new novel had little of the style and control of The Naked and the Dead. The prose gurgles with cliches, tautologies and uneasy mandarinisms. What offended the critics, of course, was the book’s supposedly socialist message. What offends the present-day reader is the book’s message, period.
The truth is that in the vacuum of success Mailer had fallen prey to the novelist’s fatal disease: ideas. His naïveté about ‘answers’, ‘the big illumination’, ‘the secret of everything’ persists to this day. An admirer of Malraux and the equally humourless Jean Malaquais, Mailer dubbed Barbary Shore the ‘first of the existentialist novels in America’ and himself ‘a Marxian anarchist’ — ‘a contradiction in terms, but a not unprofitable contradiction for trying to do some original thinking’. It is all too easy, though not very profitable, to imagine Mailer at this time, sitting around doing lots of original thinking. His thraldom to catchpenny shamanism had begun. Oh well, existentialism (so far as I can gather from Mailer’s writing on the topic) means never having to say you’re sorry.
Over the next few years Mailer underwent a kind of aesthetic nervous breakdown. The reverse he suffered over Barbary Shore released a primal scream of rage and hurt; it also wrecked his artistic confidence. The resulting combination of Big Ideas and naked desperation proved crucial to Mailer’s psychology. In a deep haze of illness, depression and drink, Mailer gouged out The Deer Park (1955). It was turned down by seven publishers.
Against the grain as always, Mailer had this time fallen foul of the obscenity laws. Or so the publishers feared — or so they claimed they feared. Mailer raged against the ‘snobs, snots and fools’ of the literary establishment but refused – at first – to tone down his mannered portrait of Hollywood amorality. When the novel was finally accepted Mailer took another look at the page proofs, intending no lawyer’s deletions but ‘just a few touches for style’.
By this stage Mailer was ‘bombed and sapped and charged and stoned with lush, with benny, saggy, Milltown, coffee, and two packs a day’. His artistic nerve began to jangle with his commercial sense. ‘I needed a success and I needed it badly … The Deer Park had damn well better make it,’ wrote Mailer in a startlingly candid passage in Advertisements for Myself. Shamefacedly, he started cleaning up some doubtful scenes. He wanted ‘a powerful bestseller’ but also wanted ‘to save the book from being minor’.
Having rendered the book major (whew!), and even more powerful, Mailer waited anxiously for publication. On a mescaline trip, he rewrote the last six lines. Confident for a while, he lost his nerve again and sent out copies of the book to various bigwigs with fawning inscriptions (‘if you do not answer,’ he wrote to Hemingway, ‘… then fuck you, and I will never attempt to communicate with you again.’ Hemingway didn’t answer). The Deer Park was a ‘half success’, as indeed was its due, and not the ‘breakthrough’ for which Norman had pined. As a last gesture, he put together a full-page advertisement with choice quotes from the reviews: ‘Disgusting. Nasty. Sordid and crummy. Junk.’